My new Signature - Give me tips!

[Sasuke DF Member Posts:287 Threads:37 Reputation 16]

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This is a signature I made- Though, I would like some tips. Constructive criticism.

My main question- Judging by the photo above, would I have a chance in the graphics marketplace?

[Weeaboo (欠 を 食べる (Ketsu wo taberu)) Posts:132 Threads:9 Reputation 46]

Well, what I would of done, would of been to make the background sort of transparent, or have the smoke / light effect you got going on there, fade away so it could match the forum. The blur, in my opinion, is dragged a bit too far out on the hand, it looks like some of the blur also hit his thumb. It should of stopped somewhere behind his bracelet.

Other than that, I don't really have anything, it looks great, I really do like the smoke effect that's coming off of him. I don't know how much of it you made yourself though, did you also sketch Sasuke himself? Or was it a render? Also, everyone got a chance when it comes to graphics. Just gotta practice.

[Sasuke DF Member Posts:287 Threads:37 Reputation 16]

Well, what I would of done, would of been to make the background sort of transparent, or have the smoke / light effect you got going on there, fade away so it could match the forum. The blur, in my opinion, is dragged a bit too far out on the hand, it looks like some of the blur also hit his thumb. It should of stopped somewhere behind his bracelet.

Other than that, I don't really have anything, it looks great, I really do like the smoke effect that's coming off of him. I don't know how much of it you made yourself though, did you also sketch Sasuke himself? Or was it a render? Also, everyone got a chance when it comes to graphics. Just gotta practice.

I did everything besides the picture of Sasuke. Here is the original:

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Thank you for the tips :) I will work on it.

[Sxarlos Og as F**k Posts:617 Threads:59 Reputation 52]

Well, what I would of done, would of been to make the background sort of transparent, or have the smoke / light effect you got going on there, fade away so it could match the forum. The blur, in my opinion, is dragged a bit too far out on the hand, it looks like some of the blur also hit his thumb. It should of stopped somewhere behind his bracelet.

Other than that, I don't really have anything, it looks great, I really do like the smoke effect that's coming off of him. I don't know how much of it you made yourself though, did you also sketch Sasuke himself? Or was it a render? Also, everyone got a chance when it comes to graphics. Just gotta practice.

Defiantly with maybe a lighting at the top and to have Sasuka cast a shadow maybe and with a little more tinkering it would look great. That's just my input nothing more so don't hate on me for it.

[Weeaboo (欠 を 食べる (Ketsu wo taberu)) Posts:132 Threads:9 Reputation 46]

Well, what I would of done, would of been to make the background sort of transparent, or have the smoke / light effect you got going on there, fade away so it could match the forum. The blur, in my opinion, is dragged a bit too far out on the hand, it looks like some of the blur also hit his thumb. It should of stopped somewhere behind his bracelet.

Other than that, I don't really have anything, it looks great, I really do like the smoke effect that's coming off of him. I don't know how much of it you made yourself though, did you also sketch Sasuke himself? Or was it a render? Also, everyone got a chance when it comes to graphics. Just gotta practice.

Defiantly with maybe a lighting at the top and to have Sasuka cast a shadow maybe and with a little more tinkering it would look great. That's just my input nothing more so don't hate on me for it.

Could do something like that, yeah. 
Another thing that I thought of, having the entire hand come in, instead of just half of the hand, to give the hand a bit more of a 3D feeling to it.

[Sxarlos Og as F**k Posts:617 Threads:59 Reputation 52]

Well, what I would of done, would of been to make the background sort of transparent, or have the smoke / light effect you got going on there, fade away so it could match the forum. The blur, in my opinion, is dragged a bit too far out on the hand, it looks like some of the blur also hit his thumb. It should of stopped somewhere behind his bracelet.

Other than that, I don't really have anything, it looks great, I really do like the smoke effect that's coming off of him. I don't know how much of it you made yourself though, did you also sketch Sasuke himself? Or was it a render? Also, everyone got a chance when it comes to graphics. Just gotta practice.

Defiantly with maybe a lighting at the top and to have Sasuka cast a shadow maybe and with a little more tinkering it would look great. That's just my input nothing more so don't hate on me for it.

Could do something like that, yeah. 
Another thing that I thought of, having the entire hand come in, instead of just half of the hand, to give the hand a bit more of a 3D feeling to it.

True, True that would give it a more 3D affect to it.

[Sasuke DF Member Posts:287 Threads:37 Reputation 16]

Well, what I would of done, would of been to make the background sort of transparent, or have the smoke / light effect you got going on there, fade away so it could match the forum. The blur, in my opinion, is dragged a bit too far out on the hand, it looks like some of the blur also hit his thumb. It should of stopped somewhere behind his bracelet.

Other than that, I don't really have anything, it looks great, I really do like the smoke effect that's coming off of him. I don't know how much of it you made yourself though, did you also sketch Sasuke himself? Or was it a render? Also, everyone got a chance when it comes to graphics. Just gotta practice.

Defiantly with maybe a lighting at the top and to have Sasuka cast a shadow maybe and with a little more tinkering it would look great. That's just my input nothing more so don't hate on me for it.

Could do something like that, yeah. 
Another thing that I thought of, having the entire hand come in, instead of just half of the hand, to give the hand a bit more of a 3D feeling to it.

True, True that would give it a more 3D affect to it.

Thank you both for the help.  :oscar:

[Sxarlos Og as F**k Posts:617 Threads:59 Reputation 52]

Well, what I would of done, would of been to make the background sort of transparent, or have the smoke / light effect you got going on there, fade away so it could match the forum. The blur, in my opinion, is dragged a bit too far out on the hand, it looks like some of the blur also hit his thumb. It should of stopped somewhere behind his bracelet.

Other than that, I don't really have anything, it looks great, I really do like the smoke effect that's coming off of him. I don't know how much of it you made yourself though, did you also sketch Sasuke himself? Or was it a render? Also, everyone got a chance when it comes to graphics. Just gotta practice.

Defiantly with maybe a lighting at the top and to have Sasuka cast a shadow maybe and with a little more tinkering it would look great. That's just my input nothing more so don't hate on me for it.

Could do something like that, yeah. 
Another thing that I thought of, having the entire hand come in, instead of just half of the hand, to give the hand a bit more of a 3D feeling to it.

True, True that would give it a more 3D affect to it.

Thank you both for the help.  :oscar:

No worries and anytime.

[BigDaddyyHD Destiney My Queen Posts:639 Threads:57 Reputation 16]

I like it good graphics and it looks great! :)

[nicnicnic DF Member Posts:7 Threads:0 Reputation 0]

Nice job on the effects mate! Keep it up