so i made a song-like thing

[Snoop Giraffe DF Member Posts:97 Threads:4 Reputation 3]

yea pretty much the title
im not sure where to put it cuz i still gotta get used to this site and all the sections xD sorry for the hassle

tell me what you guys think
any constructive criticism will greatly be appreciated

[MVT3 DF Member Posts:461 Threads:5 Reputation 8]

Is this the one where you told me to shut my mouth?
I wanna be in the video mate.

[yums DF Member Posts:684 Threads:44 Reputation 34]

Damn it, I thought the beat would drop and shit.

Straight fire, though. Keep at it.

[Snoop Giraffe DF Member Posts:97 Threads:4 Reputation 3]

Is this the one where you told me to shut my mouth?
I wanna be in the video mate.

m8 facebook would make the fucking loud ass chat sound im sorry :(

Damn it, I thought the beat would drop and shit.

Straight fire, though. Keep at it.

thanks m8, tho i did make the drop im still trying to make it sound good (i shouldve made that part first T_T)

[deverx DF Member Posts:341 Threads:51 Reputation 9]

I like the ending, not because it finishes but because the tempo increases. It took too long to get into the vibe that you want a party to have.
Not bad mate.

[Snoop Giraffe DF Member Posts:97 Threads:4 Reputation 3]

I like the ending, not because it finishes but because the tempo increases. It took too long to get into the vibe that you want a party to have.
Not bad mate.

thanks for the criticism and your opinion, ill take note :)

[deverx DF Member Posts:341 Threads:51 Reputation 9]

I like the ending, not because it finishes but because the tempo increases. It took too long to get into the vibe that you want a party to have.
Not bad mate.

thanks for the criticism and your opinion, ill take note :)

Constructive criticism and you're welcome!