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So Free ;; Poem

by Electronic - 01-09-2016 - 05:58 PM
#1
Haven't written poetry in a while I think I still got it, tell me what you think eh?

I am who I am,
Not who you want me to be.
I am who I am,
So young, but not so free.

Literacy at its finest.
I am regarded as the king.
I am who I am,
So call me your highness.

I'm trapped inside,
The walls are stone.
17 years gone by,
The vines have grown.

So many words left unsaid,
Unkempt feelings that aren't expressed.
Vibes that are better left dead.

Long way from home,
Don't know where to go.
Always left to roam.

Life is ambiguous,
Talk about a double take.
My life can be regarded as contiguous.

We're no longer together,
The wind at my back,
Feelings will last forever.

I am who I am,
Not who you me want to be.
I am who I am,
So young, but now so free.




"It takes one man to change the world, but it takes the whole world to change a man"
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#2
Awesome Poem *snaps fingers* good job!
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#3
(01-09-2016 - 06:01 PM)TheDoctor Wrote: Awesome Poem *snaps fingers* good job!

Ayyyy thanks baybee. May not be as good as you in designing but writing is where I excel <3 ;)
"It takes one man to change the world, but it takes the whole world to change a man"
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(01-09-2016 - 06:03 PM)Electronic Wrote:
(01-09-2016 - 06:01 PM)TheDoctor Wrote: Awesome Poem *snaps fingers* good job!

Ayyyy thanks baybee. May not be as good as you in designing but writing is where I excel <3 ;)

I like your poetry dude, would like to see more in the future :)
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(01-09-2016 - 06:12 PM)Alex Wrote: [Image: giphy.gif]

Omg. Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson is clapping for me. This is the biggest honor.

(01-09-2016 - 06:11 PM)TheDoctor Wrote:
(01-09-2016 - 06:03 PM)Electronic Wrote:
(01-09-2016 - 06:01 PM)TheDoctor Wrote: Awesome Poem *snaps fingers* good job!

Ayyyy thanks baybee. May not be as good as you in designing but writing is where I excel <3 ;)

I like your poetry dude, would like to see more in the future :)

:D , I might get back into it. Might also do a tutoring service for English. I'll see if I can find old writings on my PC!

I appreciate the compliments :)
"It takes one man to change the world, but it takes the whole world to change a man"
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#7
Nice poem bud, keep it up.
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(01-09-2016 - 06:19 PM)XeTangy Wrote: Nice poem bud, keep it up.

Thank you appreciate it! I will keep it up :).
"It takes one man to change the world, but it takes the whole world to change a man"
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Starts to snap fingers*** Groovey music
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