Anything I should change on this one piece sig?

[Sasuke DF Member Posts:287 Threads:37 Reputation 16]

Like what Sxar said, you should bring out Luffy a little more. But it looks good overall.

:oscar: Thanks

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Like what Sxar said, you should bring out Luffy a little more. But it looks good overall.

Maybe bring out Luffy a little more other then that it looks fine.

Ok, I brought out Luffy more. I also made him look rougher. Look at picture below.
Out like bring him more out of the smoke or make him stand out more?

Bring him out the smoke a little bit more, which then is making him stand out more so don't worry about that bit.

I brought him out more using your advice, I also made him rougher. Here is a "Before and after"

You see it looks a lot sharper then before, I like it a lot now, good work.

Thanks  :oscar: I like seeing what other people think so I can improve in the future.

[Sxarlos Og as F**k Posts:617 Threads:59 Reputation 52]

Like what Sxar said, you should bring out Luffy a little more. But it looks good overall.

:oscar: Thanks

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Like what Sxar said, you should bring out Luffy a little more. But it looks good overall.

Ok, I brought out Luffy more. I also made him look rougher. Look at picture below.
Out like bring him more out of the smoke or make him stand out more?

Bring him out the smoke a little bit more, which then is making him stand out more so don't worry about that bit.

I brought him out more using your advice, I also made him rougher. Here is a "Before and after"

You see it looks a lot sharper then before, I like it a lot now, good work.

Thanks  :oscar: I like seeing what other people think so I can improve in the future.

No worry's any time, need any help in time ahead, pm me.